Aching heart

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My heart
aches, aches of you
a muscle; a pang of
jealousy, the wanting- it hurts
save me

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Hi! Cinquain here for the dVerse Poets :)
This was written truthfully… because my heart told me to <3 
Loving someone can be painful… but it’s still worth loving :) 

 

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9 thoughts on “Aching heart

  1. Love can hurt – and you’ve definitely captured that in your poem. The repetition of aches works really well – even though repetition in such a brief form is something I’d normally avoid.

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